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优秀学案---二轮专题之短文改错

Part One: Analysis of learners &Teaching Objectives:  

Analysis of learners: You students have been aware of the key points of proof-reading   

but you have difficulty in picking these points out in a passage.  

Macro objectives: Help you students master the skills of proof-reading.  

Micro objectives: Enable you students to find fault with verbs   

Part Two: Learning Procedures  

I. Practise for recalling the key points of proof-reading  

Life is like the non-stop bus, and we are the passengers on it.   

    We used to wander together on the playground talk about life; we used to sail on the lake without sadness…  

    The old photos recalled back memories of those colorful days, which the sky was always blue and we were always rushing forward to the future with confident.  

     However, the sky seemed to go grey after the results of the college entrance exam came out. I failed it. Lucky, my friends passed the exam and they were in college now. I am the only one who have to accept the challenge again.   

     Having seen your friends leave, I got to know the meaning of life, whose real beauty lies in separation and reunion. But I will always keep the wonderful memories in my mind and never say goodbye to my dream.   

     *Learning to learn:   

Key points of proof-reading:

a .             

b.  

c.  

II. Practise for strengthening the points of verbs in proof-reading  

Play football is my favourite sport. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I was found a football on my way home. I was so curious about the round ball that I begin to play it with my friends. Now, I in the excitement of the sports. Among all the football stars, I admire Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impresses me a lot.   

     *Learning to learn:   

Key points of verbs in proof-reading and ways to solve them:

      a.  

      b.   

      c.   

      d.  

      *Consolidation:  

1.    In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and therefore this kind of exploration into outer space are worth trying out.   

2.    Besides this, there is also a forest park locating in the city center, which is the largest city forest park in China.   

3.    Perhaps one of the main reasons are that teachers work too hard but get too little. In spite of that, I am determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown.   

4.    Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea.   

5.    Some of Lu Xun’s novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice, which exposes sharply the old society. If you’re learning the Chinese literature, I think read Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.    

IV. Check your gains from this class:  

At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in that players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the World Cup in 2006, my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport. See his strong interest in this game of 22 men running after a ball, I decided to sit down to watch the game. I found game exciting, and my dad explained for the rules. They share our joy. Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!   

*Your gains:  

     

  

Part Three: Assignment

  

1.      The problem of “white pollution” causes by used plastic bags is becoming increasingly serious, in that plastic shopping bags play an important role.   

2.      One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her family. She knew he would free that day.   

3.      There have basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do. People may also choose to work in a team, which they can learn from each other and help each other.   

I’m now facing with some problems about the phone, what bothers me a lot. Firstly, I’m able to send messages with the phone, nor do the phone ring. Secondly, since my mobile phone belongs to a new type, there are no spare parts go with it, which makes it difficult to get the phone fixed. Worse of all, this kind of product has already been sold out in the store where I bought. So nowhere can I go to get the phone change now. You see, troubles may not have been caused if your products have been in good qualities. So give the money back to me. Customers who buy your products will be satisfying with better service and products.   


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